On Thu, Feb 6, 2014 at 3:09 AM, Alexander Stephen Thomas Ross maillist_arm-netbook@aross.me wrote:
On 05/02/14 22:42, Luke Kenneth Casson Leighton wrote:
QiMod Ltd.
Oh right.
so is this the tree?: |-QiMod Ltd. |---Rhombus-tech |-----EMOA68 |-Make Play Live
or is the tree something like?: |-EMOA68 |-QiMod Ltd. |---Rhombus-tech |-Make Play Live
it's
|-EMOA68 |-QiMod Ltd. |-Rhombus-tech
makeplaylive is a client. that is the only association.
so when promoting improv I say something like "in partnership with QiMod, Make Play Live have an attractive, nice and compact dev board shipped with the first QiMod Computer Card."
something like that yeah.
When promoting the computer card I have been using rhombus-tech. I'll start using QiMod from now on for the computer card. right?
yes please.
for example: " Rhombus-tech of QiMod made a new computer form factor of a computer card, does the same jobs as a PC,Laptop,Tablet,etc, It's the practical positive answer to multiple current issues
just QiMod Ltd.
Why:
"all QiMod products are long-term upgradeable, giving a lower overall cost of ownership and environmental savings"
honestly i'd leave it at that... except the educational bit... see later on...
*Environment(waste and so climate change, We can't keep going at the current rate.)
be positive. message is in the sentence above.
*spreading good will to users and developers of software that you'll use tomorrow.
... not the main message. true, but not the main message.
*badwill spreading, monopoly, up-too-no-good com's/corporations.
don't include that. be positive.
*The constant upgrade UPGrade UPGRADE!!!! tredmill and the unnecessary waste it produces.
treadmill not tredmil. better to be positive. included in the summary sentence above.
*cheep in the long-run (after first "upgrade" you've saved money and on e-waste!)
cheep is for birdies. cheap is the word you're looking for :) again, incuded in the summary sentence above.
*the students affordable portable computer and education tool and then uni project. (in other words alternative too RPi)
"alternative to" not "alternative too" - and please don't mention competing products.
so something like this implicitly covers the users/developers aspect as well as the educational one:
"QiMod Portable Computing Modules bring the benefits of mass-volume pricing to open educational communities."
so to _answer_ the question "why should you buy QiMod-designed products"? because they're affordable, compact, reuseable long-term investments masquerading as consumer appliances.
How: A thin card,
replace with "Credit-card sized"
it's a bit smaller than your hand. The computer is the card. you pop the card into the device whether its a tablet,laptop,deskbox,server,robot, you name, it a techy out there made it. Future proof, you upgrade the computer card to make it faster not the hole device!
future-proof, you upgrade the computer card, not the whole device, to make it faster.
...and so it's lot less wasteful,
full-stop.
it also won't need a fan to dump excess heat
comma
unlike typical laptops. The project will only
you have two uses of the word "only" in quick succession. drop this one.
design computer cards that only uses chips,soc's,cpu's from bizs
businesses
that respect the free as in your freedom software.
just "that respect software freedom"
Though
i think you mean "through"
this form factor existing problems with being able to have plug and play software on hardware of this type.
this sentence is very unclear.
and yet the products are in reach of being cheep as we like it.
cheap not "cheep cheep, cute birdie" :)
.......and yet all we have to do to put our money where our mouth is and buy the first dam product! preoder for shipping when everybody who said there are interested gets around to clicking the dam buy button.... :)
damn not dam :)
The soon this ship getting moving the sooner the project reachs the sky cus all profits goes into new products/the community not into share-holders pockets!
reaches not reachs. full stop after sky, drop the word "cus".
Begin the product cyclic and that future you prefer begins.... yay! or in other words... Buy today :P hip hip hu-ray :D
:)
In partnership with QiMod, Make Play Live have an attractive, nice and
drop the "nice and"
compact dev board shipped with the first QiMod Computer Card.
shipped with the first QoMid Computer Card in the series, the EOMA68-A20
7" tablet going to follow after.
make that "7in tablet and other products to follow"
Thou may get the improv now https://makeplaylive.com
.net not .org. and include the link to http://www.qimod.com
"
that ended up being a big example :).
yeah :)