On Mon Aug 8 19:29:26 BST 2016, Luke Kenneth Casson Leighton wrote:
hm i noticed it's quite long, something like the Cedrus one was 500 words. would you be happy to do something instead that _references_ what you wrote, then includes one of each of the photos, mentioning the stark contrast and summarising the difficulties that you had opening the laptop? even well less than 500 words - say only 2 or 3 paragraphs - would be absolutely fine.
I'll send you something off-list.
David